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Oedipus says no man can be hurt, "me or any man who lives in light." Yet Tiresias accuses Oedipus, "you see and still are blind."
Looking at the feedback that I got from Mrs. Cracchiolo, I believe that I did an alright job on this essay. My thesis wasn't very strong and also my sentences weren't as clear as they should have been and didn't reflect the thesis statement. I also didn't cite my quotes correctly. Although I got a 73 out of 100 I still believe I could have written my essay better. This essay was average. If i could rewrite this essay I would choose a better thesis and base everything according to that thesis. I would also choose more of a creative title.
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