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"I am afraid to think what I have done; look on't again I dare not."
This is the best essay I've written so far in this class. I believe I analyzed my quotes very well. I also believe my thesis was very strong and I did a better job of supporting my thesis with my topic sentences. The thing I would fix about this paper is my thesis. It's very repetitive of my beginning paragraph. It's also not very relate able because it has a lot of new ideas. If i could write this essay over again I would do a better job on the conclusion paragraph and also correct my small grammar mistakes. I got a
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